@gabe said in Luke's First time:
Great job! Maybe we can hear the continuation of the next time that Luke gets stuck! I loved all the detail. Maybe make it longer next time and make the stuck part the longest! I loved it. I would love to know what Luke is like.
I will continue with the same character no doubt over shear laziness if I do another story. The biggest problem is I have never been in this situation. might never be so hard to be super detailed when my only basis is videos on youtube XD but I will do my best next time. I should probably give Luke a descriptive appearance too ik over on Stuckworld most the stories have descriptions of the females what their wearing and stuff (dunno if thats too much though for here)
@Florian said in Luke's First time:
You have a raconteur's gift and more mastery of language than you are giving yourself credit for. Reading it, I had a particular Luke in mind.
Considring it took me 3 attempts to pass my english at school its amazing I wrote something readable
glad you enjoyed it. I haven't really talked to any Lukes irl. picked it from a random name generator. its a cute name I think. could of gone with lots of other names but opted for Luke as I have no connection to that name so feels less weird writing about someone I dont know if that makes sense
@Thommo said in Luke's First time:
Nice work mate. Bit of detail of the farmer wud be good...I luv it if I have to help another bloke who gets stuck. Always hope he notices my bulge.
noted I will be sure to add more detail next time overall. Did not want to make it like a really long dry read but it seems you guys want more so I will try and do more next time 